Kabal Of The Twin Souls Fluff.

hi guys im fairly new and this is my first post, and id like some feedback/constructive criticism on my new kabal!! (No bitching Plz!) Okaayy!!

So, i got the idea of my kabal and username after reading the black library novel "Path of the Renegade".
In it, the Resurrection process is explored in more detail. It basically states that so long as the eldar's will is strong enough to keep his/her soul tethered to their corpse instead of being devoured by Slaanesh or consumed, they can be resurrected and their body regrown by a Haemonculus. (its a little more complicated obviously but that isnt the subject of this post)

So the basis of my Fluff is..
My Archon (Male but un-named so far) and his biggest rival within the kabal (Female but also un-named) were killed in a blast whilst deuling during battle, and when they were both revived by a haemonculus... due to the proximity of their death, the process was corrupted and their souls were partially merged, with each character holding a portion of the others soul within them. I figure that now if one dies, the other does too, and on the flipside, when one feeds the other is also nourished and takes half of the strength.

So now neither character can allow the other to die as it will cause his/her death, and whenever they feed on pain he/she only gains half of the sustainance he/she should and so both are more bloodthirsty than the Dark Eldar average. THEREFORE...The Kabal of the Twin Souls is commanded by two mortal enemies.

Im THINKING.. my Kabal emblem is an image of an orange and a green (contrasting with my bright blue kabalite colour scheme) ghostlike shapes swirling around eachother representing both souls. Almost like a Yin-Yang symbol of balance.

now this is where YOU come in!! any comments, ideas, add-ons, or suggestions are welcome!!

It is definately interesting, but I am not entirely sure that it will work. I do like the idea, and I think it would be good if, down to the fact of having fragments of two souls, your Archon kept on having massive bouts of internal conflict. Havingy o argue his point with himself before carring out his plans.

The next things to think about for developing it further would first be the names. Good ones though, Clichéd names foten ruin a Kabal. Then you must determine their location and social standing within the courts of Commorragh, if they are in The Dark City and not fleet based.

Then, does you Kabal specialise in anything? Mass poisoned fire? Blinding Darkight beams? Do they work with a Haemonculus Coven or a Wych Cult. How did they come to work with these factions.

I do like the colours idea. If you think about these things then you will be on your way to having a ully developed Kabal.

Oh, and welcome to the Dark City.