Your talos doesn't fit, he doesn't move as fast as the rest of your army, and will get left behind. I would take him out and got up to 9 reavers in each of those squads, a second splinter cannon on your venom without two.
you should still have some points left over to upgrade other things I think.
Also when typing out your list you shouldn't put the stock things of the unit. Example: the basic armor and weapons. For two reasons, one it makes it a little harder for people to find the upgrades you are adding to the unit, and two it comes close to breaking the rules about putting published material on the web.
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