Cegorach/ Harlequin Avatar (UPDATED)

So, here's where I'm at for now. I'm pretty happy with it, but I feel like there's something missing.





What do you guys think? Comments? Criticism? Suggestions?

EDIT: So, I made the Harlequin's Kiss out of a Scourge Dark Lance and took the leftover hand from a Crypt Ghoul and used it for the right hand. I think it gives a creepy vibe that clashes with the smiling mask. The Mask is from the Skyweavers kit. I fashioned it with green stuff to look like it has a band that wraps around a greenstuff'd hood that works into the ribbon things that travel down the C'tan's body.

I would consider putting that link in an image tag instead of direct linking it

What does it look like from the front? and do you have any reference pics on what you're trying to go for?

At the top of the page there is an option for "First Image" and "Second Image."

Ah. I don't like imgur, it confused me! I would consider editing your post to put them in the body of the message.

In regards to the model, what exactly are you going for? It's hard to tell if it's an accurate WIP with no references

So, I made the Harlequin's Kiss out of a Scourge Dark Lance and took the leftover hand from a Crypt Ghoul and used it for the right hand. I think it gives a creepy vibe that clashes with the smiling mask. The Mask is from the Skyweavers kit. I fashioned it with green stuff to look like it has a band that wraps around a greenstuff'd hood that works into the ribbon things that travel down the C'tan's body.

Its looking good!

The only thought I can add right now is:
the right hand/claw, thw wrist joint looks a bit uneven. It might be worth getting the green stuff out

I think he looks really cool. I can't wait to see him painted. You think theres something missing tho? What about a mowhawk?

So, I left it as is and started painting. I'm still working on it, so please give C+C.














This image is my inspiration for the scheme. I did some research into the history of Harlequins (real life Harlequins) and saw this. It's close to what you would have seen way, way, back in the day. Since Cegorach is the Great Harlequin (the real OG....H) I figured he'd look similar.