Am I pushing my luck here?

I'm working on a second Succubus conversion, and I was going to just give her a splinter pistol, but then I had another idea. I thought I'd have a go at creating something akin to the Predator Disk:

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Unfortunately, I couldn't find any disks as small as I was hoping for, so it ended up a little too big:

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Anyway, would you accept that as Parasite's Kiss, or am I stretching the interpretation way too far?

I mean, that doesn't scream masterwork to me, mostly due to the bulk, but I'd probably still let you play it. Why not craft the core of the disc out of green stuff?

I would let you take it as such, but it doesn't look nice neither like a parasite kiss to me. I actually think that both hands are filled too much. She effectively can't use any of them...

amorrowlyday wrote:

I mean, that doesn't scream masterwork to me, mostly due to the bulk, but I'd probably still let you play it. Why not craft the core of the disc out of green stuff?

Because I suck with green stuff.

CptMetal wrote:

I would let you take it as such, but it doesn't look nice neither like a parasite kiss to me. I actually think that both hands are filled too much. She effectively can't use any of them...

Fair enough. I'll rip it off and try something else.

Thanks for the feedback.