Okay, first wrong forum, this should be posted in the army lists section.
Second for such high point games, you have
too few troop choices. You will be needing more of these as
they are the only ones who can hold objectives, other choices (such as Heavy support, elites etc.) can only contest objectives (denying your opponent to claim an objective by being as close as him to it) that means that you talos can't hold objectives.
Also I don't think that Incubi are quite efficient at 9 of them in a group (take any DE strategy from me with a grain of salt, since I'm totally new to this army). I think they are hard enough to be chilling at 4 (with a character) or 5 (without) per group. But I guess it's up to personal taste as well.
Also on another note I believe
you have very little anti tank in your list, you should consider using a couple of Ravagers and putting blasters in your kabalite warrior groups (instead of shredder, since they can dish out enough anti infantry with their splinter rifles anyway imo).
Hope you find this helpful and best of luck!