and how will you use your powers inside the WS?? You cant cast spells out, and for a suicide on turn massacre unite, eldrad is to pricey.
Haem: why the stinger pistol? Get a venom blade, you will be liquifiing in shooting phase. Crucible: like
Wyches: razor flails tend to perform better than hydra g., i personally use either razor flails, or most of the time, shardnets.
Raider: drop flicker, put up NS, if this gunboat will be shooting from distance. If not, keep the ff, but then i would advise to squeeze in a splinter rack somehow.
Ravagers: i personally dont use ravagers, but thanks to jink, i would drop FF and give the blasterborn venom twin cannons.
Dire avengers: meh, no exarch, no bladestorm, not a designated shooting, nor a designated cc unite. Meh.
Serpent: EML: duno, i either go with scatter lasers for fire dragons, or star cannons/bright lances for avengers.
Eldrad: and whats his role in all of this? sitting in the "pimp"mobile, casting nothing? Or out in the open with 1 fortune, 2 dooms and then may or may not be shot to peaces, while the DA dont really do much.
I(!) would recomend a farseer on jetbike with guardians, but thats my preference. Since unites in a vehicle dont count as scoring, and flat outing in the last turn doesnt let you disembark, GJB are very nasty for last turn capturing/contesting.