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Tengu Wych
Posts : 533 Join date : 2013-05-02 Location : The Quantum Realm
| Subject: Re: Secrets of the Hidden Library - Fiction Competition Mon May 27 2013, 21:19 | |
| http://www.thedarkcity.net/t6666-recruiting-drive
Here we go | |
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Thor665 Archon
Posts : 5546 Join date : 2011-06-10 Location : Venice, FL
| Subject: Re: Secrets of the Hidden Library - Fiction Competition Mon May 27 2013, 22:01 | |
| I look forward to reading both. This is already being a more solid success for entries than I had hoped, this is great. | |
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Mngwa Wych
Posts : 955 Join date : 2013-01-26 Location : Stadi
| Subject: Re: Secrets of the Hidden Library - Fiction Competition Tue May 28 2013, 10:14 | |
| As has been said, all these amazing entries will give a lot of tough time for the judges! Speaking of which... who are the judges? I think I know but I was wondering when it will be officially told? umm... not that im plotting anything, ofc! | |
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The_Burning_Eye Trueborn
Posts : 2501 Join date : 2012-01-16 Location : Rutland - UK
| Subject: Re: Secrets of the Hidden Library - Fiction Competition Wed May 29 2013, 10:15 | |
| My entry. Better get back to work now!
The calm before the Storm of Blades | |
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Thor665 Archon
Posts : 5546 Join date : 2011-06-10 Location : Venice, FL
| Subject: Re: Secrets of the Hidden Library - Fiction Competition Thu May 30 2013, 05:04 | |
| - Mngwa wrote:
- Speaking of which... who are the judges?
I wasn't planning to announce who the judges were, I figure that helps protect them if they desire anonymity for their work. Plus, I want all the bribes to come through me for a tithe | |
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Mngwa Wych
Posts : 955 Join date : 2013-01-26 Location : Stadi
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Thor665 Archon
Posts : 5546 Join date : 2011-06-10 Location : Venice, FL
| Subject: Re: Secrets of the Hidden Library - Fiction Competition Sun Jun 02 2013, 02:11 | |
| One week left. If you were planning to put it off till the last moment - then that moment has likely arrived Remember, no entries submitted or edited after June 8th, 12am, EST are eligible for prize support or even judging. | |
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Power Hungry Monkey Hellion
Posts : 31 Join date : 2013-03-28 Location : R'lyeh: Dead but Dreaming
| Subject: Re: Secrets of the Hidden Library - Fiction Competition Sun Jun 02 2013, 11:12 | |
| Had to join in with this as I love writing little stories to go along with my armies. Here's one for my Haemonculus Coven:
http://www.thedarkcity.net/t6738-the-osseous-halls#73290
Read, enjoy and be afraid... | |
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Thor665 Archon
Posts : 5546 Join date : 2011-06-10 Location : Venice, FL
| Subject: Re: Secrets of the Hidden Library - Fiction Competition Sun Jun 02 2013, 23:55 | |
| This is looking awesome. Expect me to post up the Reader's Choice poll basically right on the 8th - I'll leave the poll open for a week and then have it set to close down. The winner of the poll will get a prize. If we manage to pick 1st place and Reader's Choice as the same person we'll give the RC award to the runner up and whoever the lucky person was who won both will still get only one prize, but will get plenty of bragging rights | |
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PartridgeKing Sybarite
Posts : 253 Join date : 2011-11-08
| Subject: Re: Secrets of the Hidden Library - Fiction Competition Tue Jun 04 2013, 18:55 | |
| My own additions. Thank you Thor for the impetus to spend my lunch-breaks more productively.
Bound in Bone & Stitched on Skin | |
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Thor665 Archon
Posts : 5546 Join date : 2011-06-10 Location : Venice, FL
| Subject: Re: Secrets of the Hidden Library - Fiction Competition Sat Jun 08 2013, 07:22 | |
| We have reached the deadline for entries - any further entries will simply be for the joy of writing. Thank you to all of our participants, I am certain I will enjoy all of your stories, and will probably have to grumble and squint to find flaws and manage to pick out a winner. In other news - Reader's Choice Poll will be up soon! | |
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Thor665 Archon
Posts : 5546 Join date : 2011-06-10 Location : Venice, FL
| Subject: Re: Secrets of the Hidden Library - Fiction Competition Wed Jun 19 2013, 03:38 | |
| Twelve stories were written for the theme word ‘Storm’. Each was unique and interesting, but only one can stand up as the ultimate winner. - Twelve Stories Enter, One Story Survives:
My Final Storm - MongooseDog Blight Storm - Lurking Evil A Light Against The Storm - Ollelta Inner Storm - Darkgreen Pirate They Have Arrived - Mngwa Embers in The Wind - Siticus the Ancient The Tempest - Barking Agatha The First Cut - KnightSeerValkia Recruiting Drive - Tengu The Calm Before The Storm of Blades - The_Burning_Eye The Osseous Halls - Power Hungry Monkey Bound in Bone & Stitched in Skin - PartridgeKing
Before we get too much into the winners and losers we- BLOOD!...what the hell? Greetings one and all, puny things that Kharn has yet to kill. I am here to kill you, but first I am hosting this special awards ceremony!Kharn...what the heck are you doing here? The sad truth is - he polls really well with the masses, we can't get rid of him.Lilith? I thought you and I agreed I only fantasized you during...y'know...less public occasions. And I think we can both agree that you may die horribly if that thought goes any further than it already has.Is there horrible death about to happen? Kharn approves!So...is Leo going to show up? Funny that...he doesn't actually poll all that well.Plus he smells up the car during the roadtrips.Okay, whatever, but the real question is, what are you guys doing here? Fanservice...also, skulls for the skull throne.But- Writers usually have nice rounded heads, they work well on armrests.Also, we're here as a cheap teaser plug, to hint that the Dark Olympiad may be coming back.Yeah, I understand it's *really* cool and not uncool...like, y'know, Tau or something else uncool...like Tau.... ...TAU SUCK!Okay, so cheap plugs for the possible return of - The Dark Olympiad aside, what are you here for? To make this drivel 'any worth listening to at all' mostly.Fair enough, okay, so let's see, we have a few announcements to make about some of the stories- I liked all the stories with blood in them!I liked the ones that featured me...and by that I mean there was only *one* that featured me, and I'm pretty sure I was backup and not the frontman, so it's basically like an insult at that point. I presume it is simply because eleven writers opted for 'suicide by living goddess' today and one opted for 'eternal torment in a pain amplifier', so everyone who didn't venerate me properly can please line up over here so I can practice my decapitations... It's all in the wrist.*Ahem* Okay, well, first off let's offer up a few; INTERESTING YET TOTALLY USELESS FACTS!
- There were a total of 3,970 words written for the competition (not counting about four stories not judged)
- The longest story was Harpy of Tears by Partridge King (358)
- The longest legal story was Recruiting Drive by Tengu and also The Calm Before The Storm of Blades by Burning_Eye - both at exactly 350 words.
- The shortest story was The First Cut by KnightSeerValkia at only 185 words.
- The most popular length was 349 words (with three entries at this length)
- Partridge King originally wanted 'Harpy of Tears' to be his entry - due to limitations of word length he was forced to use 'A Moment's Calm'.
- The Judges universally liked Moment's Calm better than Harpy
Wow...I know, pretty impressive, huh? Yeah, you were right, those are utterly useless.All that matters is whose prose took a chainaxe, lopped off the other stories' heads and danced a hurdy-jig atop their graves to the tune of 'I'm so Pretty'!Riiiiiight. Okay then, let us first reveal our first winner; - Reader's Choice Award:
Coming through the storm of the voting with a barely edged in win of points in a very tight competition, one story stood out amongst the others. The last thoughts of an old and worn farmer, ready to spend his life in an attempt to slow down the coming storm of Dark Eldar. Your Reader's Choice Award Winner; MongooseDog and 'My Final Storm!' I liked the part where he vowed eternal and bloody revenge via fire on all Dark Eldar. It was a touching teen romance story.That's not quite what the message was. Of course, we disabled the weapon and then tormented him for the next hundred years, extending his life as an amusement, all for his temerity in thinking he could oppose us.
This is fact.
Moving on! - 2nd Place:
In the maelstrom of these turbulent stories, one stood out as different and interesting. It had chosen to take a leap away from the norm, and explore the meaning of storm through alternate prose methods. A lone wych, his trailing memories, and a bloody past, all are hidden in only a few words about knifeplay. Your 2nd Place Winner; KnightSeerValkia and 'The First Cut' It was beautiful, he really captured the essence of storm *and* the beauty of the proper obsession with the art of the kill.Personally speaking, I always find the last cut to be the more important one in a fight.You're just too crude to get poetry.What? Here! Roses are red Violets are blue I have a big axe. POETRY FOR THE BLOOD SOAKED POETRY GOD!
Well, as fascinating as that was, here's the real question, whose prose reigns supreme? There were many fine entries, indeed the Judges debated a few personal favorites back and forth. That said, there was one story that stood out as special to all of us... - 1st Place:
What is 'Storm' to the Dark Eldar? Is it a raid? Is it the action of the arena? Is it the spatter of viscera across a stainless floor? Is it all these things? More? One story answered the question with a rather cruel and simple answer. The storm is power, danger, madness, escape, and the Dark Eldar are those who choose to claim it to accomplish all the above and more. Step into the story and experience the darkness, and the question. Could you control the storm, or would you be destroyed by it? Your 1st Place Winner DarkgreenPirate and 'Inner Storm' Oh, yes, the storm *will* be unleashed. It is destiny.PAIN FOR THE DARK MUSES, DARKNESS FOR THE DARK CITY! Kharn approves of this story!I think special honorable mention goes out to Embers in the Wind (a story that I think all the judges wanted to see more of). Also Blight Storm, as the quintessential take on a Raid = Storm, and Osseous Halls, which I think nailed the Coven theme almost better than anything else I've yet read. That said, all the stories were pretty awesome - there was a fair amount of debate because so many stories ranked high with each judge.
Hope you all have enjoyed reading the stories here, and I hope to see you all next time if we manage to do this again (there seems to be a decent amount of requests already). Feel free to weigh in below on anything you'd like to see changed if we were to do the competition again (different entry length, more/less time to write, more/less time to judge, ect. ect.) If you were a prizewinner, please PM me your mailing address so we can get to work sending you your awards. You also can feel free to snag the *highly artistic* brag banners I made for you. Feel free to make nicer ones for yourself if you wish Also, remember to say thank you to *all* the participants, for making this first competition such an awesome success. I know I was only expecting maybe 5-6 entries, and the sheer amount of response and positive input was STAGGERING to me and super awesome. Thank you everyone who participated, I hope to have the chance to laud one of your works in a future competition! Also, remember to pay attention for the return of the Olympiad. There will be more blood, more action, more lewd and low-brow comedy passed off as wit-And more Kharn!Well...nothing's perfect. | |
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MongooseDog Kabalite Warrior
Posts : 138 Join date : 2013-03-25
| Subject: Re: Secrets of the Hidden Library - Fiction Competition Wed Jun 19 2013, 03:57 | |
| Yay. So many good stories. Really glad i decided to enter. Thanks for the votes. | |
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The_Burning_Eye Trueborn
Posts : 2501 Join date : 2012-01-16 Location : Rutland - UK
| Subject: Re: Secrets of the Hidden Library - Fiction Competition Wed Jun 19 2013, 07:25 | |
| Walks along street disconsolately kicking stones in the manner of a sulky teenager.
Congrats to everyone, both the entrants and the judges, I must try harder next time!
I really enjoyed taking part and seeing everyone's take on the different ways of incorporating the theme into a piece of writing, can't wait to do it again, though perhaps 500 words next time? | |
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Darkgreen Pirate Sybarite
Posts : 302 Join date : 2012-01-06 Location : The Great White North
| Subject: Re: Secrets of the Hidden Library - Fiction Competition Wed Jun 19 2013, 07:34 | |
| High praise indeed Thor, I thank you, and those who voted for me. To be counted first amongst such an impressive group of works is quite humbling. However I will not let my guard down my fellow Archons...In fact I shall be redoubling my personal guard. I look forward to the next competition! | |
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KnightSeerValkia Kabalite Warrior
Posts : 223 Join date : 2011-08-24 Location : Liverpool, England
| Subject: Re: Secrets of the Hidden Library - Fiction Competition Wed Jun 19 2013, 14:27 | |
| I'm definitely wanting that banner you made Thor! Also...second place! Sweet, I have to thank you everyone for such a great experience, to all those that voted in the competition and especially all the great works everyone came up with =D For next time, I'm setting my sites on first place...so Darkgreen Pirate enjoy your title...for now anyways | |
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Lady Malys She Who Must Be Obeyed
Posts : 1102 Join date : 2011-05-18
| Subject: Re: Secrets of the Hidden Library - Fiction Competition Wed Jun 19 2013, 16:09 | |
| Congratulations DarkgreenPirate on your well-deserved victory, and thanks to everyone for an awesome read! I look forward to next time! | |
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Siticus the Ancient Wych
Posts : 936 Join date : 2011-09-10 Location : Riga, Latvia
| Subject: Re: Secrets of the Hidden Library - Fiction Competition Wed Jun 19 2013, 20:32 | |
| Congratulations to the victors! Do watch your backs... you have now been painted targets to be beaten, your positions to be taken, and your own good names besmirched and thrown into mud! It is what motivates our kin the most, after all - defeat and a thirst for revenge!
But really, great work everyone! | |
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Mngwa Wych
Posts : 955 Join date : 2013-01-26 Location : Stadi
| Subject: Re: Secrets of the Hidden Library - Fiction Competition Wed Jun 19 2013, 21:55 | |
| Big applause to all the winners, was an exciting competition and I liked that you brought a little... roleplay or whatever you can call that. - Lelith wrote:
- I liked the ones that featured me...and by that I mean there was only *one* that featured me, and I'm pretty sure I was backup and not the frontman, so it's basically like an insult at that point.
...does this mean I have to run or that I should go talk with her? EDIT: Now that im here, I also want to advertise something I have been working on and what I would like to have more readers: http://www.thedarkcity.net/t6400-the-dooms-hidden I have a break on writing that right now, but will get back to it someday. ...it is slightly inspired by Trueborn. | |
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Gobsmakked Rumour Scourge
Posts : 3274 Join date : 2011-05-14 Location : Vancouver, BC
| Subject: Re: Secrets of the Hidden Library - Fiction Competition Wed Jun 19 2013, 22:06 | |
| Congratulations Darkgreen Pirate, KnightSeerValkia and MongooseDog, your names shall echo through the halls of Commorragh for aeons to come!
And well-done to everyone who entered, I thought they were all great stories. I am looking to reading many more. | |
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Mngwa Wych
Posts : 955 Join date : 2013-01-26 Location : Stadi
| Subject: Re: Secrets of the Hidden Library - Fiction Competition Wed Jun 19 2013, 22:23 | |
| Hey, one thing yet... Who were the judges? My farseer suggests Cavash and Lady Malys, but I require confirmed info! | |
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Lady Malys She Who Must Be Obeyed
Posts : 1102 Join date : 2011-05-18
| Subject: Re: Secrets of the Hidden Library - Fiction Competition Wed Jun 19 2013, 23:25 | |
| Not me!
... what are you doing consorting with a Farseer? | |
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Tengu Wych
Posts : 533 Join date : 2013-05-02 Location : The Quantum Realm
| Subject: Re: Secrets of the Hidden Library - Fiction Competition Wed Jun 19 2013, 23:40 | |
| Yes
Its bad enough there being so many defectors | |
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Darkgreen Pirate Sybarite
Posts : 302 Join date : 2012-01-06 Location : The Great White North
| Subject: Re: Secrets of the Hidden Library - Fiction Competition Thu Jun 20 2013, 06:02 | |
| - Lady Malys wrote:
- Not me!
... what are you doing consorting with a Farseer? maybe its a pet . | |
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Mngwa Wych
Posts : 955 Join date : 2013-01-26 Location : Stadi
| Subject: Re: Secrets of the Hidden Library - Fiction Competition Thu Jun 20 2013, 10:06 | |
| - Darkgreen Pirate wrote:
- Lady Malys wrote:
- Not me!
... what are you doing consorting with a Farseer? maybe its a pet . Indeed it is a pet. And more importantly, pet food. Hello there dear khymerae! Today on the menu, we have boiled farseer eyes and fresh eldar toes! Enjoy! Now to start looking for a new pet. Farseer stores are hard to find though. Still... who are the judges?? | |
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