Trying to make a Dark Eldar character...

Zehra wrote:

I was thinking, but let me know if ths is too cliched, of the Haemonculus removing the embryo from her mother as she's dying maybe, like Vect sent assassins after her because he found out she was pregnant and the Haemonculus finds her still barely alive and removes the baby from her and grows it in an artificial womb. Does that sound interesting or plausible?

I don't think that Vect would be concerned with his good reputation. Certainly not enough to kill someone for bearing his child. Now some of Vect's enemies being petty enough to try and strike at Vect through Zehra's mother I can see.

Spanna uv Komor-AAAGH! wrote:

Zehra wrote:

I was thinking, but let me know if ths is too cliched, of the Haemonculus removing the embryo from her mother as she's dying maybe, like Vect sent assassins after her because he found out she was pregnant and the Haemonculus finds her still barely alive and removes the baby from her and grows it in an artificial womb. Does that sound interesting or plausible?

I don't think that Vect would be concerned with his good reputation. Certainly not enough to kill someone for bearing his child. Now some of Vect's enemies being petty enough to try and strike at Vect through Zehra's mother I can see.

Ok, that might work!!!

Here are a few nibbles for thought: The mother is upset with Vect for disposing of her and sees her child as a future weapon or bargaining tool (assuming there's a difference). She seeks the Haemonculus' aid as a way to prepare her - in exchange for her own ability to lure high-class victims for the Haemonculus. Though really he is just amused by the scenario, which means a lot more to an artist of the soul. Vect actually knows what's going on and doesn't care. He indirectly supports her development though, setting up the convenient opportunities with the Black Heart Kabal. Spoiling coups in the making is his job. Idk what you want with wyches though. It is very suetastic in principle and needs a lot of fleshing out to avoid that. But don't worry. If you want you can pm that pic to see if I get any ideas for the girl herself.

Khrivaan wrote:

Here are a few nibbles for thought: The mother is upset with Vect for disposing of her and sees her child as a future weapon or bargaining tool (assuming there's a difference). She seeks the Haemonculus' aid as a way to prepare her - in exchange for her own ability to lure high-class victims for the Haemonculus. Though really he is just amused by the scenario, which means a lot more to an artist of the soul. Vect actually knows what's going on and doesn't care. He indirectly supports her development though, setting up the convenient opportunities with the Black Heart Kabal. Spoiling coups in the making is his job. Idk what you want with wyches though. It is very suetastic in principle and needs a lot of fleshing out to avoid that. But don't worry. If you want you can pm that pic to see if I get any ideas for the girl herself.

I'm debating on not making her a Wych anymore, but maybe another type of warrior. I'd have to e-mail you the pictures though, if that's alright. Like I said it's still a work in progress but I want her to not be as Sue as possible.

Ok, I still need help, so anymore suggestions would be helpful. I'm thinking of making her a Kabalite warrior now, but if any of you can suggest a better career, I'm open to hearing it.

Lhamaean. Perfect mix of Kabaite Warrior, Haemunculi apprentice and consort.

Local_Ork wrote:

Lhamaean. Perfect mix of Kabaite Warrior, Haemunculi apprentice and consort.

Oooh!!! Sounds exotic!!!
That's a good idea, I need to find out more. ^.^