Welcome back to the Dark Kin!!! lets see what I can do for you
HQ: Both are good. You might want to drop the shattershard for a liqufier so that you can use it multiple times from your raider (remember not to get them out unless you absolutely have too)
Elites: Fine. Just remember the one with more Blasterborn is always going to be the first target for your opponents. Use that to your advantage.
Troops: Good. The problem I have is that you dont have alot of them. The more troops the better since troops are what captures objectives now. You might be hard pressed to hold objectives, but go ahead and try it out and see if you need more.
Also I find that putting too many upgrades on raiders is a waste of points. Outside of Flickerfields and maybe Nightshields and Shock Prows everything else is kinda iffy on a AV 10 death coffin.
FA: Good choice. Use them well.
HS: Good, but I find that Ravagers really dont need NS to live. They shouldnt be in melta range by a long shot, and everything that would be targeting them normally has a 48~36" range anyway. If I was you I would move these NS to the Blasterborn venoms instead.