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Thor665 Archon
Posts : 5546 Join date : 2011-06-10 Location : Venice, FL
| Subject: Secrets of the Hidden Library - 2nd Annual FIction Competition - WINNERS ON PAGE 6 Thu May 01 2014, 03:44 | |
| The Fluff- Spoiler:
Draconess Isme Hy'till, of the Kabal of Shrouded Knowledge entered the great library, her footfalls causing small clouds of dust to puff into the air, the dancing motes wafting about in idyllic arrays before her face as she held high a guttering copper torch, the flickering gree fires casting light across the vast chambers before her.
Row upon row of bookshelves waited there, each groaning under the weight of countless tomes filling each and every one near to breaking. The tall dark wood shelves rose up high towards the ceiling, passing beyond her torch’s nimbus of light. If she had learned that the bookshelves supported the very roof she would have been unsurprised. She peered into the darkness.
“Librarian!”
She knew no other name to call him, or even…well, or even if he was a ‘him’ at all. She had met the librarian only once before, and had decided he sounded like a man. But if he was it was hard to say, perhaps he was female, perhaps he lacked true gender. An ‘it’ perhaps? Was it even an Eldarith? Was it some construct, some scientifically generated being created only for the purpose of maintaining the treasure of the knowledge here? Or was it something else, something darker, more sinister, more subvert?
“Librarian! I know you can hear me!” Her ire sounded hollow, her shout of demand sounded weak in the vast, empty, chamber. The last echos of her cry died out and she felt alone and foolish. Her hand gripped at her venom blade and she was about to spin on her heel and march out when a quiet whisper sounded behind her. A voice as soft as dust, crinkling like ancient paper.
“I recall you, you have been here before, did my humble library aid you in your battle?”
Irma turned around, pacing about in the darkness, her torch high, but try as she might she could catch no sign of the librarian. “I led the attack, I stormed the gates, knowing that I, and the Eldarith Ynneas were the storm, I focused my anger and power, and I am not sure I could have done all of that if not for the stories you showed me.” She hated to admit this, but she was relatively certain that he would be unlikely to partake of court gossip. Indeed, she had never had any inclination that anyone else had ever spoken to him.
“I am pleased. You have come for more knowledge then?”
“I have.” She licked her lips, knowing her next words would commit her potentially to her action. “Archon Mureed has grown soft, and old, and weak. He fears my powers, and it is my intent to depose him.” She waited, expecting something from the librarian. A cry of outrage, an evil chuckle of shared plotting, perhaps even a simple shocked gasp at her audacity. But…nothing. “Well!?!”
“You have stated intent, but have not asked a question. I cannot provide you answers without a subject.” The voice almost sounded bored.
“Archon Mureed, he is old but is not toothless. His guards and allies are ample, I need to learn the best method for a Dracon to seize his power!”
“To seize his power? To take his seat. To claim what belongs to another. Such ambition, such drive, such…pride. I know many stories of pride.”
“Not just pride, you distractable fool, I need to know about seizing power, about overcoming odds, about…” She realized the sense of the librarian was gone, and she could already hear the sounds of books being rummaged through. Isme sighed slightly to herself as she started down one of the long and narrow rows of bookcases, already finding a small pile waiting for her at the next intersection. Ancient scrolls, books, data slates, and more – each and every one already marked with a note or bookmark indicating where she might find what she desired.
“This had better work,” Isme sneered as she picked up the first offering and began to read…
The Rules Welcome to Secrets of the Hidden Library, a recurring fiction competition here in The Dark City. The purpose of this competition is to create some works of fiction, have some fun reading them, earn some prizes, and hopefully enjoy it all enough to do it again in the future. Anyone may participate (besides the judges, and they know who they are) The Story
- You will write a story, 500 (five hundred) words or less (but not more, seriously now).
Post the story in the Stories & Art; The Black Library forum here on TDC.
Please also post in this thread with a link to your story - indicating you wish it to be part of the competition.
I would also encourage you to include a notation in the topic title about it being an entry - to help readers find and locate them when browsing.
The only limitation to what the story is about is that it should feature Dark Eldar - and also utilize the theme word in some manner.
You may use the theme word in any manner you wish, feel free to be creative!
The story should have a title - the title will not count as part of the word count.
You may write more than one entry, but must indicate to judges which entry you are submitting for judging, you may change your mind at any point up until deadline.
The Theme WordPRIDE. DeadlineYou may post your story at any time. No stories posted *after* June 8th, 12am, EST will be eligible for judging or prizes. You may edit your story at any time - but any edits after June 8th may leave you disqualified for prize support. JudgingMyself and the other two judges will begin judging the stories on June 8th. There will also be a Reader's Choice award poll put up - where anyone can vote for any story as the 'best' Scoring will be based on a 1-10 scale in the following categories; Use of theme word.1 point = it was just randomly in a sentence and had no meaning within the work. 10 points = highly creative use of word, or meaning behind the word, to advance the story and connect the story to the theme word. Quality of narrative.1 point = I fell asleep trying to read it. 10 points = Really interesting, made me enjoy reading it throughout. Grammar, punctuation, and appearance.1 point = solid block of text, written in l33t sp33k, no punctuation at all. 10 points = Proper use of punctuation, no misspellings could be noticed, all words used correctly, neat paragraphs spaced for readability. PrizesThere will be a prize for 1st, 2nd, and Reader's Choice awards. We will come up with a prize pool consisting of books, models, or other DE related stuff...frankly I'll admit we're going to come up with volunteers from the Mod staff to get you prizes based on which of the volunteer mods are closest to your mailing address If you're in the Continental US I will probably be the mod who will send you prizes and I will offer you a list to choose from - letting 1st, Reader's Choice, and 2nd have choosing preference in that order - other volunteer gift givers will be able to choose their own methods, but considering some of the conversation about gift ideas I do pretty much promise you'll get something cool. Have FunAnyone not having fun will be eligible for banning at any time I look forward to seeing what you can all come up with.
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clively Sybarite
Posts : 297 Join date : 2013-03-19
| Subject: Re: Secrets of the Hidden Library - 2nd Annual FIction Competition - WINNERS ON PAGE 6 Thu May 01 2014, 22:44 | |
| Here's my entry for the competition:
http://www.thedarkcity.net/t9205-orb-of-despair-secrets-of-the-hidden-library-2nd-annual-fiction-competition#97850 | |
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Jimsolo Dracon
Posts : 3212 Join date : 2013-10-31 Location : Illinois
| Subject: Re: Secrets of the Hidden Library - 2nd Annual FIction Competition - WINNERS ON PAGE 6 Fri May 02 2014, 00:59 | |
| Did I catch the word limit correctly? Not complaining, just making sure. (500 is pretty short for 40k fiction.) I just want to make sure I'm not in a situation where I'm submitting flash fic and everyone else just 'knew' that Thor meant 1500 or something. | |
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Baron Tordeck The Helfather
Posts : 1872 Join date : 2011-02-28 Location : In your Nightmares
| Subject: Re: Secrets of the Hidden Library - 2nd Annual FIction Competition - WINNERS ON PAGE 6 Fri May 02 2014, 01:25 | |
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Thor665 Archon
Posts : 5546 Join date : 2011-06-10 Location : Venice, FL
| Subject: Re: Secrets of the Hidden Library - 2nd Annual FIction Competition - WINNERS ON PAGE 6 Fri May 02 2014, 01:39 | |
| - Jimsolo wrote:
- Did I catch the word limit correctly? Not complaining, just making sure. (500 is pretty short for 40k fiction.) I just want to make sure I'm not in a situation where I'm submitting flash fic and everyone else just 'knew' that Thor meant 1500 or something.
Last year we did a 350 word limit, and it worked out pretty well, but people did ask for a longer go of it. So this year it's 500, you are reading that correctly. I find the short length can become an interesting barrier for the competitors because it's surprising how quickly it will creep up and limit you, and at the same time it helps keep the story very focused. | |
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dokclaw Slave
Posts : 22 Join date : 2013-01-29 Location : Montréal
| Subject: Re: Secrets of the Hidden Library - 2nd Annual FIction Competition - WINNERS ON PAGE 6 Fri May 02 2014, 02:08 | |
| Here is a link to my entry. I had been thinking about writing some more fluff for a while, and this has provided a nice reason to do so!
http://www.thedarkcity.net/t9206-dolmadaen-s-end-secrets-of-the-hidden-library-2nd-annual-fiction-competition#97868 | |
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Thor665 Archon
Posts : 5546 Join date : 2011-06-10 Location : Venice, FL
| Subject: Re: Secrets of the Hidden Library - 2nd Annual FIction Competition - WINNERS ON PAGE 6 Fri May 02 2014, 02:30 | |
| I'm already excited we have two entries already - you guys racked those out! (you're way more efficient than I, the lord of eternally unfinished stories...) It will be interesting to see how we do in comparison to last year for number of entries. Most people seemed to want the word limit longer, so this might oddly mean more entries than the shorter competition - go figure As usual, I know I'm not going to read them till the judging starts, because I want to just have that first impression moment, and also do it all at once so I have a similar mindset. I do, of course, encourage others to partake however it pleases them. | |
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KnightSeerValkia Kabalite Warrior
Posts : 223 Join date : 2011-08-24 Location : Liverpool, England
| Subject: Re: Secrets of the Hidden Library - 2nd Annual FIction Competition - WINNERS ON PAGE 6 Fri May 02 2014, 16:19 | |
| 500 Words to small? Last time it was 350 and it seemed fine to me, but then The First Cut was only 185 words... | |
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Lady Malys She Who Must Be Obeyed
Posts : 1102 Join date : 2011-05-18
| Subject: Re: Secrets of the Hidden Library - 2nd Annual FIction Competition - WINNERS ON PAGE 6 Fri May 02 2014, 18:26 | |
| Hmm, Pride. The sin Dark Eldar do best. This should be interesting | |
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Thor665 Archon
Posts : 5546 Join date : 2011-06-10 Location : Venice, FL
| Subject: Re: Secrets of the Hidden Library - 2nd Annual FIction Competition - WINNERS ON PAGE 6 Fri May 02 2014, 19:57 | |
| For the curious, my final word selection choice was;
Pride Lascivious Shriek
I think all could have been pretty interesting, but Pride spoke to me. | |
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Haagrum Slave
Posts : 23 Join date : 2014-04-12
| Subject: Re: Secrets of the Hidden Library - 2nd Annual FIction Competition - WINNERS ON PAGE 6 Sat May 03 2014, 18:06 | |
| Some great entries so far - competition should be intense, but that's the Dark Eldar way, after all.
Here's my entry - The Fall of Thandrom | |
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Jimsolo Dracon
Posts : 3212 Join date : 2013-10-31 Location : Illinois
| Subject: Re: Secrets of the Hidden Library - 2nd Annual FIction Competition - WINNERS ON PAGE 6 Sun May 04 2014, 06:38 | |
| So, does the theme word actually have to appear in the story itself? Or can it simple be about the theme word? | |
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Baron Tordeck The Helfather
Posts : 1872 Join date : 2011-02-28 Location : In your Nightmares
| Subject: Re: Secrets of the Hidden Library - 2nd Annual FIction Competition - WINNERS ON PAGE 6 Sun May 04 2014, 07:10 | |
| From the rules - Quote :
- Use of theme word.
1 point = it was just randomly in a sentence and had no meaning within the work. 10 points = highly creative use of word, or meaning behind the word, to advance the story and connect the story to the theme word.
Interpret that as you will. | |
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Jimsolo Dracon
Posts : 3212 Join date : 2013-10-31 Location : Illinois
| Subject: Re: Secrets of the Hidden Library - 2nd Annual FIction Competition - WINNERS ON PAGE 6 Sun May 04 2014, 16:58 | |
| Yeah, I saw that. I was just curious how other people were interpreting it... | |
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Thor665 Archon
Posts : 5546 Join date : 2011-06-10 Location : Venice, FL
| Subject: Re: Secrets of the Hidden Library - 2nd Annual FIction Competition - WINNERS ON PAGE 6 Sun May 04 2014, 21:47 | |
| I think last year one of the top three stories didn't actually have the word directly in the story. You may interpret that as you will also | |
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Jimsolo Dracon
Posts : 3212 Join date : 2013-10-31 Location : Illinois
| Subject: Re: Secrets of the Hidden Library - 2nd Annual FIction Competition - WINNERS ON PAGE 6 Sun May 04 2014, 22:09 | |
| Thanks! | |
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Cakeaunoob Cake Who Thirsts
Posts : 184 Join date : 2013-01-12 Location : Behind you
| Subject: Re: Secrets of the Hidden Library - 2nd Annual FIction Competition - WINNERS ON PAGE 6 Tue May 06 2014, 15:17 | |
| Good luck to everyone! Here's my entry. http://www.thedarkcity.net/t9228-the-usurper-secrets-of-the-hidden-library-fiction-competition | |
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Thor665 Archon
Posts : 5546 Join date : 2011-06-10 Location : Venice, FL
| Subject: Re: Secrets of the Hidden Library - 2nd Annual FIction Competition - WINNERS ON PAGE 6 Tue May 06 2014, 15:33 | |
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Haagrum Slave
Posts : 23 Join date : 2014-04-12
| Subject: Re: Secrets of the Hidden Library - 2nd Annual FIction Competition - WINNERS ON PAGE 6 Wed May 07 2014, 12:37 | |
| Just wanted to clarify one point - it seems fairly clear from the rules that this is the case, but there's a limit of one story per person? Best foot (or claw, or pseudopod) forward and all that? | |
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Cakeaunoob Cake Who Thirsts
Posts : 184 Join date : 2013-01-12 Location : Behind you
| Subject: Re: Secrets of the Hidden Library - 2nd Annual FIction Competition - WINNERS ON PAGE 6 Wed May 07 2014, 12:39 | |
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Baron Tordeck The Helfather
Posts : 1872 Join date : 2011-02-28 Location : In your Nightmares
| Subject: Re: Secrets of the Hidden Library - 2nd Annual FIction Competition - WINNERS ON PAGE 6 Wed May 07 2014, 14:26 | |
| From the rules - Quote :
- You may write more than one entry, but must indicate to judges which entry you are submitting for judging, you may change your mind at any point up until deadline.
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Haagrum Slave
Posts : 23 Join date : 2014-04-12
| Subject: Re: Secrets of the Hidden Library - 2nd Annual FIction Competition - WINNERS ON PAGE 6 Wed May 07 2014, 14:53 | |
| - Baron Tordeck wrote:
- From the rules
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- You may write more than one entry, but must indicate to judges which entry you are submitting for judging, you may change your mind at any point up until deadline.
/self-dopeslap Thank you, Baron Tordeck. It would've helped if I'd read the rules more closely before asking that question. | |
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Vindicavi Kabalite Warrior
Posts : 188 Join date : 2014-01-21
| Subject: Re: Secrets of the Hidden Library - 2nd Annual FIction Competition - WINNERS ON PAGE 6 Wed May 07 2014, 23:26 | |
| Well guess I'll toss my entry into the ring whilst I'm here.
http://www.thedarkcity.net/t9243-on-loathsome-wings-secrets-of-the-hidden-library-2nd-annual-fiction-competition#98250 | |
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Thor665 Archon
Posts : 5546 Join date : 2011-06-10 Location : Venice, FL
| Subject: Re: Secrets of the Hidden Library - 2nd Annual FIction Competition - WINNERS ON PAGE 6 Thu May 08 2014, 03:33 | |
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Unorthodoxy Beating A Different Drummer
Posts : 839 Join date : 2014-03-25 Location : Western Washington
| Subject: Re: Secrets of the Hidden Library - 2nd Annual FIction Competition - WINNERS ON PAGE 6 Thu May 08 2014, 19:59 | |
| Hmm, this looks like a fun contest. You guys are doing some work here I see. | |
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